| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: visual sensations On: April 20, 2006 12:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic plz keep it going i want to know what happens
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Title: What a live!
Reviewed By: serveren On: April 20, 2006 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
May be not original (but it's a fanfic), don't know if there is any style better, but it's a pleasure to live it through
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Title: Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I haven't read many I+K fanfics (they all seem the same to me), but I really have to congratulate you. Your story line has really set this story apart. While the idea isn't completely unheard of, you've put a new twist on this plot. Not to mention you've actually made an effort to include ALL of Takahashi's characters (and not in an elementary, cliche pattern either). You've given their progression in character more than a little thought (though I still think Miroku's a little OOC. He only acts perverted as means for a distraction and/or as a comic relief; i.e. they're uncomfortable). But you have brought new meaning to these characters! *gives you a cookie* I can't wait to see what Shippou looks like. I'm glad I caught this story at this particular chapter (I love stumbling upon stories like this). ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: KelseyFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 13:12 EDT
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Its a really good story I understand why it won a price. Im putting this story on my favorites and will wait eagerly for the next chapter. I hope that Inyasha and Kagome will mate in the next chapter.
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Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: REDSILVERDRAGON3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update. this is a good story. its funny, romantic, and everything else in between. please update!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: mel f On: April 04, 2006 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic cant wait for more so please keep up the good work and update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 00:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: gittelbug(when loged in) On: April 03, 2006 04:18 EDT
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awsome chap. but there is something wrong with MM.org since there is a big gray bar blocking alot of the words. maybe you should relod it.
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. o_o I'm positive that I cannot possibly express in a review why I love your fanfic so very much, but I have to say something because I'm so happy that I ran into it, so here we go. I found this fic last night, and couldn't stop reading for all of the seven hours it took me to finish it. You've done a wonderful job portraying the characters and their emotions in an amazingly realistic way. I love how you kept them canon, but at the same time accounted for how they would have changed over time (Souta...kyaa! ^-^). You've also provided some new insight into some of the characters that I believe can be applyed when examining the series itself, and I must say that I haven't read a fanfic that has done that for me in at least a year. I don't generally interpret Kikyou - or Kagome's feelings about her - in the way you did (like in the first chapter, for example) but you made it believable - which no one else has ever managed to do, as I am particularly stubborn regarding my views on the two. I'm also inclined to dislike fanfics that involve the Sesshoumaru/Rin pairing, but again you made it seem plausible, not...um...disturbing like it usually is for me, and downright sweet, actually. I'm also aware of how difficult it is to write a story along the canon manga plot, and I commend you for being able to stick so directly to the facts in that respect while creating such a deep and interesting storyline. So though you probably already know from all of your reviews so far, I just have to tell you what an amazing writer you are, and how brilliantly written this fic is. I cannot begin to tell you how shocked I am by how well you have done...everything. While I was reading I was constantly being struck by how perfectly the details come together to make such an enthralling piece of work. There are very few fanfics that make me conciously realize how well they are written, and there are also few that touch my emotions like yours has so far. Bravo. I'm going to stop rambling now, and I'll be waiting eagerly for the update you promised. ;)
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 22:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I hope you update soon I can't wait to find out what happens
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Reviewed By: KuririnLover1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've shared a few emails with InuSaga and told her that I only want to ever read your story (and stories to come) and hers because I'm tired of sifting through all the muck to find a wonderfully written fanfic. She said that she (along with others) have been pushing you to update, and only a day or two later, you did! YAY! I was very excited! Thanks for the update (even though I had to reread some chapters) and good luck with the rest of this fantastic story! You have captured all the characters beautifully, and it is very easy for me to imgaine them speaking this dialogue, so thanks! :P
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Title: HAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: CHRISTIANITY3 On: April 02, 2006 19:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THE STORY PLEASE COMPLETE IT
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan (not sighned in) On: April 02, 2006 15:05 EDT
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O_O eep! '
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: April 02, 2006 11:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great update, & as always, just hilarious. I definitely look forward to the long awaited lemon.
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Reviewed By: Kyou_kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 05:15 EDT
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YAY! an update! Great chapter as always ^_^ I have a feeling Inuyasha is going to regret not listening to Myouga's advice. Shippou revealing his true form was great! Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!
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