| "Slave Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: MidniteShadows (not logged in) On: January 29, 2011 21:25 EST
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I think it'd be nice to just know what happens to them. |
Reviewed By: @___@ On: April 06, 2007 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a great story you have here. Is it possible that you could write more? It has been too long since your last update T.T Have you discontinued it? I hope not
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:44 EDT
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loves it...the only thing is that u moved REALLY fast...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: GDW!!!
Reviewed By: GDaywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUCK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I really hate it when authors rush their fics. I do it sometimes myself but I've always been a suicidal jackass. You need to slow it down. I don't get why Kagome would possibly want to be Inuyasha's mate. I mean, yes he's sometimes nice to her. Yes, she's got a fetish for assholes, but still. The point is that she never shows him any sort of affection. It's like, he's being an idiot...again...and she decides to become his mate. WTF!!! That doesn't make sence. If a guy that you just met climbed into your bed and started biting you in uncomfortable places, would you A: kick his ass or B: have sex with him? That's the kind of choice Kagome's given and she chooses B. Either she's stupid or she likes him for some reason that's not written in the fic BECAUSE YOU NEVER WROTE IT!!! I suggest you rewrite this fic immediately. Either that or add some extra chapters in the middle....otherwise I liked it...
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: May 31, 2006 16:41 EDT
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this is a cool story. it does seem a tad bit rushed in spots, but is still over all very good. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: b/witch On: December 28, 2005 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i real liked your story liked it so much i'm hoping you write more Please!!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Duranfan On: September 24, 2005 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic. I like it. Update soon.
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That one was awesome update soon plezzzzzzz and thank U
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 02:42 EDT
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Really good fic your writing here, though I must say you do have a few spelling errors such as the word "scent". That looked like the only word you mispelled though so overall your doing a really good job and I'm looking forward to updates =)
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Title: slavekagome
Reviewed By: crzy144 On: September 18, 2005 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update soon thx
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it...good job...a few spelling errors but nothing real major...update soon...luv Ty
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Reviewed By: Akihana.., On: September 18, 2005 10:01 EDT
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Wow...its been a while. I wasn't sure if you were gonna continue. Well, they're going to Kaede's now. Woo! Nice to see you're still going.
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Title: Woot! An Update...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 06:54 EDT
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Awww, they found Kaede!! This getting really adorabke. Next time don't stay away so long! Well done!
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: July 01, 2005 03:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story SO bloody much! Keep writing, I'm hanging out for your next update!
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Reviewed By: celestialangelofwater [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really luv this story!!! ^_^ slave based love sotries are always mai fav. Inuyasha i think is just goin a little bit too fast but i guess thats okay wit me. Please update soon!!
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