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| "Darkness & Light" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: borgrabbit
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2009 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting twist. I would hope that this wouldn't be the end, as Akane's death cries out for justice against Cologne. The storyline is a little reminiscent of 'Hearts of Ice'. Kill Cologne!!!
| Reviewed By: shadowknight0001 On: March 02, 2007 01:44 CST
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ouch, that valkyrie don't seem to be please by her mission to drop the name of her summoner after having said that she was not allowed ti do it. But now Ranma know! I hanve the feeling that it will be now time for retribution. I think that as of now, the amazon nation is a endagered species.
| Reviewed By: Storyweaver On: January 09, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very enjoyable fic. I really wasn't expecting the twist with which creature was the attacker and which was the guardian
| Reviewed By: zaitcev [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 19:48 CDT
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The plot travels from A to B, which are not connected directly (Cologne- Mousse- Akane- Death- Farewell- Future-). I saw this scheme in Japanese novels, but in Western culture this is consodered abnormal, because there is no central conflict and resolution (except for "connections" or "picture of life" type of setup). Characters appear in good shape, no OOC. The language is excellent, smooth as silk, carries along well.
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:46 CDT
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Alright to start it off, you have very descriptive sentances, and do a very good job of reveiling the plot. A little bit of created backstory was nice. However, (This comes from the part of me that is extremely attached to Akane.) Character deaths should be put into both Warnings and in the summery. T.T. Now that that's out of my system. A few spelling errors, and you could have used the characters real names. (Cologne, Mousse, Shampoo, Tendo.) I was getting very confused, (Even if these names were from the Japanese versions.) Stick to one language. The plot was okay, but I do think there was something lacking. Aside from the usual. This could have been extended with a few fight sequences, or a few scenes from Ranma. Also a grammer and spelling cheak is always good to use. (Even if you cheaked once already. Just general info.)
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