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| "A Different Road" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: poisoncandi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
2 chapters is not complete its a tease! you started off so good please continue. pretty please
| Title: well i dout u'll update
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
up date if u want to revive this fossil
| Title: Wahoo~
Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 21:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
'Ey, me again. I'm very much enjoying this 'fic, and enjoyed reading the relationship between Naruto and Sakura- They're so nice together, as friends, and it made me laugh whence I read about the Ramen owner's thoughts- I would've been asking people if they were stoned or something. xD; The only gripe about this I have is the chapter length- Take it easy! It's great to see you're so passionate about writing that you stay up that late, but I for one would prefer quality over frequent updates. Otherwise, keep it up!! n_n
| Title: KEEP IT UUUP
Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I must say, I'm looking forward to reading more of this- The Gaara/Sakura/Shino thing isn't a popular triangle, but dude, keep it up! Saku/Shino and Gaara/Saku are awesome couples, you combining them just makes it all the more entertaining. And I'm glad you said that there wouldn't be any more small chapters- This first chapter was more of a trailer than anything to me, or a really short prolouge. Also, Gaara was a tad bit out of character to me. But otherwise, keep this up, I look forward to reading more! ^-^
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