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| "Silver Lining" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: oohhh
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well me also being a writer and all amd not about to critic someones writing style , but the stories great! Is she really preggy? Aw man i can't wait till you update keep up the good work! You've been Kissed :-*
| Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, poor Gohan!! ....... Vegeta's never very good with words, all right... but neither is Gohan. Man, what a twisted up, torn and fantastic problem the girl has on her hands now. Intersting, as soon as Gohan judged him, she was cast as a "slut" to vegeta.... or maybe it was just the insult on his tongue at that particular moment? Hmm.... I'm also guessing that with as sharp noses as sayajins have, when goku finally comes back for a day (and stays..... or not)..... he might NOT be pleased with the whole turn of events in the last couple of years. Heh. Heh. Heh!
| Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 23:30 CDT
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Besides sounding like a total pervert and a skeez by going on about how "great!!" the chapter was because of the (obvious) sex, I thought I'd try talking about something else to not sound lik a (complete!) pervert an' all..... Great chapter again! Since only two months have progressed since the last chap., Gohan still attend some uniform-wearing middle school, right? Or did, as it's mentioned that it's the end of the year.. (I think so, at least-- i don't completely trust my own faulty memory) ... will she attend orange star high the next year, or not? Or is she even old enough yet? (sorry for the barrage of questions... but i was wondering these things) No Brolli? Awww! But.... ah well. Vegeta's gunna get a lot of ass, i guess, and no competition for it. Meh heh heh! I am, however, going to stay glued to your other dbz 'fic for his (hopeful) appearence.... Mentioning the other (now deceased) evil saya-jin that make appearences throughout the series... I'm guessing none of them took any more special interest to Gohan than as already gone in the usual timeline, even though Gohan was female? Bah, I'm sure since she was still a child at that point, they saw it as no point and had no interest? I guess they don't focus their plans for secruing as far as ten + years into the future and all.... Well, maybe Paragas would, but... Anyhow. Great touch that Gohan-chan's (still?) a head or half or so shorter than Vegeta-san... will she shoot up as much as her male counterpart did?
| Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 19:21 CDT
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Okay, given my typical level of idioticy, I only now realized that when one fill reams of information of their mm.org account with their various 'favourites', the authors of the particular works prolly don't get notified...... So marking this story up a thousand plus times to my 'faves' list won't do. (even though i'm prolly just going to do it anyway).... Anyway. I really, really like this. Gohan as a girl is an utterly unizue and totally untested rhealm.... I'm guessing Nappa, Turles and Raddiz aren't gunna show up again... but Paragas and Brolli are still yet unseen... will they be as interested as vegeta (loudly) proclaims they'll be? ; )
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