"Into Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Shall you be posting another chapter? Reviewed By: mistress of the furious cloak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 20:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I must say that your fic is cute, atleast the first chatper and i hope you would continue you it. I don't like to review much but i think you have something good. Thanks much and please post the next chapters!
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Title: still waiting Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: July 18, 2005 19:09 CDT Comment/Review: when are you going to update your fic?! I'll be waiting! Raven/Robin are my favorite pair ^-^
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Reviewed By: jessica* On: June 16, 2005 16:02 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UUUUUPDAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! thank you =D
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Title: waiting Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: May 20, 2005 21:10 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'm WAITING FOR MORE.... MORE... I DEMAND IT! -legions of squirrels growl and cheep in the backround, holding up pitch forks and torches to revolt soon if no new chapter-
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 23:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I like what I've read so far, but please update. I want to read the end of it. The one thing that took me out of it was how Slade kept saying "one's", that was pretty annoying rather then menacing. If there were anything I would revise if I were you, it would be the Slade dialogue. I would appretiate if you did me a favor and reviewed some of my stuff. I always welcome criticism.
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