| "Her and Him" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 22:29 CST
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this is good...short but good...
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was awesome!!! I loved the first few chapters the most!!! Anyway I like them because I'm a so called "dark sprite" at my school but I sing & write not draw. Of course if people knew me they would think I was insane cause when I'm with my friends I'm almost always smiling or being goofy but thats only in the safety of a house or secluded place away from preppy posers. Anyway cant wait to read what happens next. Please update soon. Also, sorry about my babbling I'm really hyper tonight. Well have a nice uh... life!!!
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Title: Hey love
Reviewed By: yoursweetkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i loved it.. you ROCK..and did i ever tell you that you are anwsome writer!!!!..anyway..see you at lucnh!!!!! Hugs, Kiki
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 23:09 CDT
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I like this story I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 22:46 CDT
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awesome story lol update soon plz
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 14:16 CDT
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I hope you update soon I really like this story
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 21:26 CST
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very touching. poor souta, i feel so bad for the kid. man...something bad coming? worse then her cutting herself and nearly losing her baby brother to suicide? ouch. i'm loathing finding out what it is. can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:27 CST
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wow. that's...really sad. when a seven year old can contemplate suicide...it's a shame. running, jumping, climbing trees...that's what kids should be doing. not making nooses. very scary real life scenerio added in. i'm interested to see what happens now that little brother is awake and how he fell out of the coma. great story, keep it going!!!
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Title: NICE!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just read this story today for the first time. i really like it. i hope to see more from you. so with that said let me wish you good luck with your story and please do update again soon.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow. i can't believe you only have four reviews so far. this story is good. it's well put together and you have a very strong character depiction for Kagome and for Inu. i like the internalization of the thoughts that you have given each character and allowed room for them to expand. i like that it's inu changing to fall from the 'jock' role of school 'hottie' to fit more to Kagome, which is rarely done. .it's normally goth Kagome becomes school sweatheart (gives you toothaches, ne?) you have a great story here with a pretty well put together background. i feel that there are a few things missing though, that i am sure you will develop in later chapters, but i felt compelled to mention them. you have stuck a very strong disdain between Kagome and her mother. the qoute from Kagome about no one ever needing her mother was very vengeful that i feel should have been elaborated more on. it's hard to write something so vindictive and full of malice then just let it melt into the plot. becareful with that. that chapter, nearing the end, i felt was a bit rushed. i noticed that there was no comment from inu of all teh pictures (and i'll guess that there were tons) of him on her walls...something that might have been adressed normally. i think you should devote a chapter to Kagome's past life, her relationship with mommy dearest, and souta in a hopsital (?). very good story, i love it and i can't wait to see what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 17:31 CDT
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the story so far is really good, but that was really evil to leave off when Kagome's mom walked in. Oh well, still good, please please update soon, i wanna know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: beth tigeress On: April 24, 2005 15:59 CDT
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great! now, hurry up and update again soon! please!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 10:30 CDT
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I love it! Finally, an original story with a very interesting plot ^^ I like Kagome as a goth...Really, it's great ^^ Please, keep writing ^_~
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, its pretty interesting. Is Inuyasha going to go through with the dare? Whats going to happen next? Please continue ^__^
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