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| "Petals" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: XD penpen On: September 23, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i seriously thought the entire story was perfect. even though it really freaked me out. ¬_¬ it was really creepy, but i think i'd be really/i> cool if this was in the series somewhere o_o
| Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh. This was very creepy, loved the effect of the scratches on the door, the ofuda lighting up, and especially how you made something as pretty and innocuous as cherry blossoms seem...evil! That was great! ~~ In addition to telling a really good story, you kept everyone perfectly in character. Thanks for posting this.
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