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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 19:32 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kiyana On: September 02, 2005 17:01 CDT
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Interesting. I should have anticipated bondage. Wonder if Inuyasha will have a chance to do the same in return at any point? But seriously, it just seems like Inuyasha's being dragged along at this point, what with all the references to how Kagome's becoming more sexually active and demanding (And Inuyasha not getting any of the same). At this rate, within a few chapters he'll be unable to satisfy her. ;)
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:58 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: rawambition On: August 31, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt rate. jaime
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Reviewed By: rawambition On: August 31, 2005 20:47 CDT
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i love this story, if i had to criticize it it would be that some times you leave out words "small ones" but still they are left out, and i understand that you rush to get the chapter done for us. like i said that is the ONLY thing i can criticize. i have just one question are you going to add any shessy to the story, if so that would give another twist to the already great story. could you tell me if you are or aren't? thanks, and again "I LOVE" your story, keep up the "GREAT" job.
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Title: Aewsome lemonade!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Been reading this for awhile, glad you updated. Terrific lemon -just the right amount of S&M, heh.
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: it's sailorgirl16 On: August 11, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really funny and thanks for the props
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Reviewed By: censored On: August 11, 2005 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for a good fanfic that i usually read to be updated. I was gettin tired of just the ok crap and the non ok crap that i've been reading out of sheer boredom. PLZ! update faster this is one of the best stories that i read and i only read the best stories, unless im bored. To get me to review i either hate the story and am just flaming or i love it! Keep up the GREAT! work.
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Reviewed By: n On: August 05, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I AM DIEING HERE! *cry* just update the fricking story
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Reviewed By: sweetnothinangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfics...update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kiyana On: July 13, 2005 12:27 CDT
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So Kagome's planning some revenge, eh? Hopefully it's not of the 'Bow to me, manslave!' or 'If you won't do it with me, I'll go find someone who will' (Either the threat version, or the one where she actually goes and does it) varieties. I can't remember any focus on anything similar to what Kagome's feeling that Inuyasha might be going through (The increased energy, etc). Then again, I can barely remember any scenes where Inuyasha's actually got something in return (Although that could just be my bad memory :P), so that might be one reason why. It makes me wonder if you might eventually decide to have Kagome turn hanyou or youkai (I *really* hope this isn't the case...), or something.
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Reviewed By: shioo On: July 13, 2005 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just started reading your fanfiction and i think its awesome. i liked it so much that i started reading the first chappie at 10:36 pm and ihave been infront the computer reading all chapters till 3:39 am becouse i really get in the story... continue the nice work, i love your writing style and i will come back tomorrow to see if you up date the next chapter ^^, i want to know what happens next >.> *cof*exelent*cof*lemons x////x ...shio... (sorry if you dont understand my review, i dont know english perfectly, but well here you have a Mexican Fan ^^) Oh yeah i dont think they are OOC, i mean they are acting different because they revealed love for each other... but its my opinion.. dont let fuckin reviewers make you feell bad, i mean they dont even know what a fanfiction its about... it your story not theyre... byt well -___-U
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Reviewed By: shioo On: July 13, 2005 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just started reading your fanfiction and i think its awesome. i liked it so much that i started reading the first chappie at 10:36 pm and ihave been infront the computer reading all chapters till 3:39 am becouse i really get in the story... continue the nice work, i love your writing style and i will come back tomorrow to see if you up date the next chapter ^^, i want to know what happens next >.> *cof*exelent*cof*lemons x////x ...shio... (sorry if you dont understand my review, i dont know english perfectly, but well here you have a Mexican Fan ^^)
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Reviewed By: KittyKatFighter On: July 10, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!! P l e a s e, p l e a s e write more, it's a little OOC but that is okay with me!
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: KireiChan* On: July 07, 2005 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! LOL Thankyou for e-mailing me at Kerochankawaii@msn.com for letting me know you updated! i just haven't had much time to get on the computer lately. but i have read chapters 15 through 24! they are ALL VERY well WRITTEN! your writing is VeRy GoOd you must update and e-mail once you do! inu/kag forever! KireiChan*
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Morbid_angel On: July 04, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful, I love the sterial aspect that you added. it was great. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope to see it soon.
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Reviewed By: KaGaShA0101 On: July 04, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the storie, keep up the good work, dont let the dumb readers bully you. lol. by the way you spoke after one of the chapts id say thats easy to ignore lol, lata
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it -update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashas_truefan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i cant wait to see what happens next i love your story so far
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:39 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really love your story! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You are doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work. Please put the next chapter in soon. PLEASE!!
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Title: Realization: Secrets Slip and the Truth is Told ( Chapter 14 )
Reviewed By: KireiChan* On: June 05, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! I TOTALLY LUV THIS STORY! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!? i am dying to find out when inu/kag will have sex lol and i also want to know is will Miroku except Sango's appology? OH PLEASE UPDATE! i want to know! LOL! e-mail me at Kerochankawaii@msn.com once u update pwease! yOuR faN, KiReI cHaN*
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Reviewed By: kitty1990 On: June 04, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! LOVED IT! It's so sweet and romantic. I can't wait to read what happens next. So put the next chapter in. You're doing a great job. Your story is the best story I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey write how you wont I love it and can not wait till the next chapter will is be a lemon ?
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 12:45 CDT
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i love it dont listen to the idiot dickwad that is notloggedon fucking retarded bastard no one can see his name! and your story is different and kagome is different cuz this is a fanfiction not the real thing that fucking idiot should just shut up! your story is really awesome ignore the asses.......... lots of love please update
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 02, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thus far im really liking your story. yes the characers are a little ooc, but that doesn't bother me much. very nice work! keep it up and update again soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:47 CDT
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Responding to the Chickenshit reviewer: Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT No one sees your name or your fanfic posted here. It's called fan fiction for a reason. If everyone's shit was the same it would be boring. At least she posts stories and isn't a half-assed chickenshit flamer. Phantomflame, you're great. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:43 CDT
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bwahahahahaaaa! and the story unfolds! Good job.
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Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT
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Kagome is really mean to Inuyasha throughout this whole story. That's not how she acts in the anime or manga. She has a temper, of course, but most of the time she's nice and understanding to everyone. You've made her a very selfish character in your story which is not how she acts in the anime and manga. And why did she and Sango get mad at Miroku and Inuyasha when they went to the sauna? They didn't do anything wrong. You gave no reason for Sango and Kagome's anger except that the village women were peaking at them, in which case they should have been angry at the village women and not Inuyasha and Miroku. You have not made Kagome a likable character in this story at all and I feel sorry for Inuyasha at the way she treats him. She hits him when he's injured and yells at him. That's not how Kagome's charater would act. She lets him give her pleasure then gives him nothing in return. She's completely selfish and reading about it is not enjoyable and I don't think I'll read this story anymore.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: May 31, 2005 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow.....nice work, very well done. update again soon plz?
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