| "Thank You, Mother" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Teresa C. On: May 03, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say Cece. I just loved it and that is it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Judeau On: April 30, 2005 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
just iggy my ratings they got all mussed up
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Reviewed By: Judeau On: April 30, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the read alot Cece makes great stories and i always enjoy your work even though the song isnt in my catagory of good music a lyric makes a song great and the lyrics were very good. and the story was great too and the perfect girft to your own mum to let her know how much she loves you and you love her
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is certainly a touching fanfict of the love a son has for his mother. Though you could do with a few more examples of love that aren't so extreme. The song at the end should act more to summarize and crown the events than dominate the story. A minor nitpick, it is unlikely for Kurama to refer to dishes as 'China' and that the dream school for most Japanese kids is Tokyo U or other universities in Japan. His comment in regard to 'leave for Duke' should really be 'leave for the Demon World' as he is far more likely to go there for long periods of time. Still, this is a touching short fict and well suited for Mother's Day. (Excuse me while I go off and tell my Mom that I love her. ^^ )
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: April 25, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am gonna cry. im adding it to my favorites i love it....yay, im the first to review.
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