| "Dream Machine" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: YucieLUv_ On: August 24, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe i loved it plz contiune you i really want 2 know what happens ok well good bye and have a nice day and remeber no Preasure ok well bye and have a nice day! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Sabas On: August 22, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I read the previous chapters (err..chapters 1-8) a while back, but didn't leave a review. Forgive me. This story's freakin' awesome, its been a while since I've something of this calibre. Very hott stuff ya got here. The lemon scenes (all of them...well, maybe 'cept Ayanami's, that was just weird =P) were very well written out. I loved how you are evolving Asuka throughout this story. Hehehe, Misato has a good point, I see addiction becoming a real possibility here, lol. Anyways, kick-ass story! Keep it up and update soon. (btw, good point about the plug-suits...I'll keep that in mind...) Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Lord Aaron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a decent PWP EVA lemon in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Unique
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: April 26, 2005 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a unique twist. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fd5gt On: April 24, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that just made my day...that was a very original concept of yours and I look forward to reading more...as long as it's Asuka based...she's my favourite character...however I found a few parts a little confusing and difficult to understand but I'm sure it's just me that cannot understand it and it's sure to make perfect sense to everyone else...or something...@_@
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 23, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I was starting to think there weren't any new lemons left in the world. A bit short, but good. Please update soon!
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Title: Just read chapter 5
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Hooray for smut! :) Good point about the plugsuits.
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