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Title: Sweet...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Niiice... excellant to see that you updated. Even better to see that this was a superb update. This chapter was excellant, you wrote out everything perfectly. I was particularly amused by that section where Hikari is talkin to Asuka about her particular experience with Toji, freakin hilarious. Great job, keep up the excellant work! d('')b
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Title: Great! :)
Reviewed By: Marcos_Edson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I'm not into bondage stuff, this chapter made me have second thoughts on the matter, I guess it's thanks to you making it light as you pointed yourself... :) I really wouldn't mind to see a little more... :) Hikari almost deserves her own series already, it's fun to see the now former class rep in a different role and not the over used nice, house-wife type girl, not that I dislike it but wild girl Hikari looks cooler. :)
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Daniel1469 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great part great story altogather but please update sooner i beg of you please
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
It certainly *does* show! Great chapter. I can tell you spent a lot of effort on it.
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Title: [Chapter 7] Wow.
Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best lemon scenes I've ever written in this section of MediaMiner. Bar none. And if you continue writing scenes and subplots like that with the main plot of Dream Machine... you have a very real shot at becoming my favorite NGE lemon-scene writer. Ryn0r
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Reviewed By: AnzuNOTTea On: September 20, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, pretty good stuff. In my opinion, the idea of tentacles in the evangelion world is unusual enough to be cool. Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Font On: September 17, 2005 08:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man oh man, this is a pretty decent shitty lemon. Possibly the best lemon series I've read in a while. Wasn't exactly impressed when I first started reading, but it sort of grew on me as the chapters progressed. Now get off your lazy ass and write another chapter.
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Reviewed By: YucieLUv_ On: August 24, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe i loved it plz contiune you i really want 2 know what happens ok well good bye and have a nice day and remeber no Preasure ok well bye and have a nice day! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Sabas On: August 22, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I read the previous chapters (err..chapters 1-8) a while back, but didn't leave a review. Forgive me. This story's freakin' awesome, its been a while since I've something of this calibre. Very hott stuff ya got here. The lemon scenes (all of them...well, maybe 'cept Ayanami's, that was just weird =P) were very well written out. I loved how you are evolving Asuka throughout this story. Hehehe, Misato has a good point, I see addiction becoming a real possibility here, lol. Anyways, kick-ass story! Keep it up and update soon. (btw, good point about the plug-suits...I'll keep that in mind...) Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Lord Aaron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a decent PWP EVA lemon in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Unique
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: April 26, 2005 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a unique twist. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fd5gt On: April 24, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that just made my day...that was a very original concept of yours and I look forward to reading more...as long as it's Asuka based...she's my favourite character...however I found a few parts a little confusing and difficult to understand but I'm sure it's just me that cannot understand it and it's sure to make perfect sense to everyone else...or something...@_@
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 23, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I was starting to think there weren't any new lemons left in the world. A bit short, but good. Please update soon!
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Title: Just read chapter 5
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Hooray for smut! :) Good point about the plugsuits.
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