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| "A Meeting with a Long Forgotten Piece" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: shadow child [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! Even though it tends to be a little hard to keep up with, but that's mostly my stupidity towards Japanese. Mei-Yuna seems cool but if I had to say then to be honest she's just bordering on the edge of Mary-Sue, I don't really get the first chapter but it is definitely funny! *graps popcorn* update soon pleeeeeeease ^_^
| Reviewed By: DarkFangs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dark: ^^ yeah, enjoyable & interesting, as it shud b! me liked that!! Iris: (6) hehehe, Kai will suffer!! Oh joy!!! Dark: *quirks an eyebrow* Dun mind her... Iris: -_________- It was u who drank 4 cans of soda yesterday, not me. Dark: Well, mayb, but Tiff got it worse! Tiff: *grins* Heck, u bet, I drank red wine!!! XD AAAAAAAND, I'm still looking 4 Brooklyn! XD XD XD Dark: *sweatdrops* ANYWAY, I'm sorry 4 the last time we chatted, my MSN went down... grr, stupid thingy.. hope u update soon ;) can't wait 2 read more! Iris: Keep it goin'! ^^
| Reviewed By: DarkFangs On: April 26, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dark: *nods* Yup!!! Ur style is better now, the grammar's not at 100% but I'v got that prob 2 *o.O* Iris: *rolls eyes* U bet she does... Dark: *glares* 'NEWAY, me likes this better now ^^ & it had fun parts, interesting ones & of course, a bit of drama & sadness 2, which never is enough in my opinion *XD* Iris: but as it's her opinion, it doesn't count ^^ Dark: grrr!!! well, keep up the good work plz & update soon!!! Iris: yeah, so that she can stop annoying me. Dark: *O.O* u r the one who annoys the hell outa me all the time... Iris: *stucks out tongue* Dark: -_________________________-;;;;; That's not polite... well, we'll b off now... Iris: yup, so that she doesn't bore u 2 death. Bye *** Nice story. Plz, do make Kai SUFFEEEEEEERRRRRRRR!!!!!!!! (6) MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Dark: *o.O* Never mind her... C ya, DarkFangs
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