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| "A Little Love Between Friends" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: birdboy2000
Reviewed By: birdboy2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A solid lemon... I mean, you've got to stretch a bit for Hanajima to be like that to Kyo, but she's weird enough, I wouldn't put it past her... And the dialogue's good, the characterization's perfect... I really liked it.
| Reviewed By: KiyoneKage On: July 01, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was so good...i liked it...you should do one with Shigure, Tohru, and Arisa...wait, that would be kind of weird...maybe not...but that's just an idea... Great job...it was so incharacter...especially Kyo...very good... Nice work, Kiyonekage
| Reviewed By: Aoi Tsuki On: June 28, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. this is my second time reading this story if that tells you anything ^ ^;; I really enjoyed this fic, it is very well done. Tohru and Kyo are my favorite pairing but I love so many of the other characters as well. I am certainly going to check out more of your fiction
| Title: A Little Love Between Friends
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn!! That was totally awsome! I'm a bit surprised that you didn't have anything much between Kyo and Hana, but maybe in a sequel or something that can be changed. ^-~ I really liked it! MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I love your stories. Keep it up!
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