| "Protectress" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ryoubaku On: August 09, 2005 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa...uhh jou's accents a little crazy don't you think? I mean its good and everything and I hope you update!
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Reviewed By: 32 On: May 10, 2005 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: nvs On: May 10, 2005 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Monkey Man Bob On: May 10, 2005 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Morgawr On: May 10, 2005 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wiseman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me Heerobusia well it's pretty good for your first. My first one wasn't all that either. You should try and avoid comparing your characters to anime characters of other shows because your readers my not know what you're talking about. Besides it was pretty good keep at it.
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