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| "Don't Want To Be A Kid Again" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Good first chapters
Reviewed By: Alero - Offline On: June 01, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much of a Wufei x Treize fan, but can easily put up with it for now. You've started off nicely although I think that you could have possibly went into more detail with each couple. It sounds kind of rushed at the moment. As for the new little kids. I think it's somewhat odd that tehy all adopted. I don't know how else it couldve been done though. I really can't see any of them having kids ^_^;. It's still a good story, I'll keep reading and reviewing if you keep writing!! I wanted to rate this an 8.5 but upgraded to a 9. Keep going you have a good idea. If there is a war though are you just going to let the original gundam gang die and go tothe new one or are you going to put both in. Try to develope teh characters a little more. I'm loving Try and Solo right now!
| Reviewed By: picaresque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great start! Keep writing i think it's awesome.
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