| "The Maiden of My Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Crystaru On: August 10, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kiyaaaa!! Domo kawaii!!! Write more, please? I really love this!! what's going to happen next? I wannna know! I wanna know!! Onigai? Update? *Has big hopeful eyes and pouts, basicly the puppydog pout* Onigai?
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Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was....interestingly good. I really want to see how things play out, so please update as soon as you can. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: July 14, 2005 03:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon, please please please!!! i'm begging here :D
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Reviewed By: Why change their names? On: May 18, 2005 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story, but it's irritating that you are changing their names. It makes it seem Mary-Sue. Is this a Mary-Sue?
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: May 01, 2005 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blushes wildly* in my honour?!! why, thank you, that was very nice. Sango seems to be utterly rebellious, does that have anything to do with Kohaku's situation? By the way, that passing note and talking in class part reminds me of when I did it in Junior's and was emmbarrased to hell when the teacher exploded in front of the class. Hey, will Kagome gain unwanted attention from Kouga in the next chapter??!!! Please update sooon!!! I reallly want to know the meeting between Kags and see how Inu reacts on seeing his dream girl in daylight!!!
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Reviewed By: Son Lila On: April 24, 2005 21:53 CDT
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This story is really cool! I love the whole nickname thing and the way the girls became such fast friends. I can't wait to see Inu's reaction to seeing Kagome. Please update soon! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Lady_pip On: April 24, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot! haha i love your story, it's so original. I've never really been much of a fan of futuristic settings but this one really caught my eye. I love your story, and i hope you update really soon. I can't wait, Always, Lady Pip
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: April 24, 2005 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Guess what, this is the first review I've ever written on Mediminer so I can't comment on the grammer due to lack of experience. But I honestly enjoyed the storyline so far and I think the ideas of the dream, rivalry, future setting and thoughts all add to a very unique story. ( *cringes at own wording*) Anyway, please please keep it up!!!!
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