| "Heaven Needed an Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lynnea On: September 04, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strong writing. Powerful story. I am totally hooked. Please update soon! Thanks,
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Reviewed By: no one On: June 29, 2005 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a powerful story. you've done such a wonderful job so far. now when the heck are ya gonna update?? i'm dying here!!
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: May 05, 2005 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now I do hope that you will update as soon as possible. This is one of your best chapters. I cant wait to see what other conflict that you have in store for these two guys. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: May 02, 2005 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. All though I think it was a little short for me. Oh well... I hope to see you update soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: April 29, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really have something here. You are very descriptive and kept the story very interesting. I have never seen a story line with mother lane passing.. It has always been Dee or Ryo. I do hope to see you continue with this story. Keep up the good work
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Title: Its so kawaii!
Reviewed By: Spunky87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. It has a very original story line and its so kawaii to see Ryo comfort Dee. Please don't let Penguin die but I have a feeling thats what you have planned anyways. Please keep updating, especially with the way you left us with that damn cliffhanger!
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