"When Duo Gets Tied Up" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Inso On: October 11, 2003 09:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed this story, lately I've read a lot of yaoi lemons (mainly gundam wing) and they tend to be poorly written, and usually in script style. I'm glad to see that there are people actually using paragraphs, and I'm very glad to see that you're using BDSM in you're story ^-^ thats always glad to see! I would've liked it to be longer and more detailed though! Follow Up!
| Reviewed By: Hidama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 23:48 CDT Comment/Review: ah... i enjoyed that very much, nice twist in it. gentle bondage. the way it should be. |
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