| "Everywhere and nowhere" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: O.O Nice plot twist!
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: May 06, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I definently didn't see that onwe comming. Of course if it wasn't 1:59 am where i am righnt now, it could make a diffrence. Anyways you're doing an exelent job of writing this right now so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: flying fish On: May 04, 2006 23:32 CDT
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Please fix the formatting on the last chapter. I like this story a lot but I'm having trouble reading the most recent part. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Gantaeno On: May 04, 2006 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O YOU LIVE?!?!?!?!?!?! Ahem, sorry, Gantaeno from AFF.net here... you know? With the groovy club dancing? :P Hope you update soon, if there's one thing I've hated during the AFF.net move, its missing out on the final chapter of this piece :) Hope to see it soon?
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Reviewed By: 2Sexy4TheDragons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 19:05 CDT
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From the sounds of it, you're a lovely author, so I'm by no means insulting you. I just wanted to inform you that Ryou is not albino. Albinos rarely have brown eyes (if at all). Also, the only condition where a person with albinism would have white hair, they would also have very pale skin (probably lighter than Ryou's) and blue, red, or purple eyes. Yesss, that is all. xD; Just. Wanted. To make that known.
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Title: I LURVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: WhiteTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A GOD CURSED TO LIVE AMONGST SUCH FOOLS!!!!!!! I LURVE YOUR FICTION!!!!!! RYOU/SETO FOREVER!!!!!!! *drools at the lemonyness* The uber skexy dragon + the oh so innocent british angel = uber hot lemons
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Title: aka Dark Magician Girl Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress(not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 01:33 CDT
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Of course I would want you to write a one-shot about his night out! That would be delighfully satisfying if you would, hehehe. *grins* I pick Marik, cuz he's the only fav bishie I luv paired w/ Baku! Besides Ryou-kun that is. lol. And your writing so ISN'T bad!!! ^_^ I would've just responded to this on ff.net but they don't allow two reviews for 1 ch so I wouldn't be able to review the ch once you replace it. And I do suggest you delete the a/n as soon as possible on there or at least put the actual story content on it too, since ff.net doesn't allow just separate author notes. Just thought you might want to know, cuz I don't like awesome stories like yours to get deleted because of some stupid rule. Anyways, can't wait til the next ch and the one-shot. See ya. ^_~
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Title: arrrgh!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 14:24 CDT
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How could you?! I must read the SEX! excellent story, by the way. PLEASE FINISH!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress who is not logged in On: July 11, 2005 03:58 CDT
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*chuckles* I just love the way it's written with lots of hints of humor involved. And Ryou is quite the saint, so says Seto. lol. Very alluring fic, still not sure what you're up to, and I definitely can't wait for more. Till then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style, it makes our(the readers) Lives a little easier and to that I praise. This fic is awesome and SO CUTE! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work...Please!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! That was some story, very alluring and the style is just as intriguing. Beautifully written. Loved the cute silliness in it, making me suppress my giggles in the middle of the night, XD. Would comment more, but I must go. Hope you write more soon, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: ElveNDestiNy On: June 13, 2005 02:05 CDT
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Huh, I didn't realize that reviews aren't separated by chapter. That kind of explains why the number of reviews is pretty small for such a nicely written story. Your use of 'whitenette' is kind of disturbing, though - I don't know if it's a real word, but even if it is, maybe you can find a better adjective to describe Ryou. I also notice that you tend to get a little repetitive in the way you describe him. Even so, good job. I'm almost exclusively a Seto/Yami reader and writer (except recently I've done Seto/Amelda) but this story has drawn me in. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ElvenDestiNy (ff.net) or subtle allure (here) On: June 13, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what an impressive first fanfic. You characterized them all very well and I'll be going on to read now, so I'll save other comments for later. I never understand why so few people take a moment to give feedback to the author -_-U especially on mediaminer. FF.net readers are so much more friendly, or maybe it's just because I don't have a hit counter and haven't found out that only 5% of my readers actually review. Kudos to you, what a great beginning =D
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Reviewed By: David F [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now usually I'm not one to read yaoi (nor am I a fan of it.) But reading your fic description piqued my curiosity. After reading the first chapter I really like it. Thanks for opening my eyes and mind.
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: May 13, 2005 23:30 CDT
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Gotta love the police comment! I giggled so much I think I woke my roommate. Sorry I didn't review before I really like this story. It stands out and was beautifully written. I can tell it has the makings of a favorite of many already. I think Mokuba is so funny and I love the cat outfit! The whole ad thing is a little strange but kind of fits for this pairing. I mean how else would they ever meet? Ever read 'Angel' by Dragondreamer Yami Dragon? Same pairing and it has a sequal, love DD YD's stories. I'm so thankful that you updated I wouldn't've after just one review. Probably would've thrown a fit about how everyone else is just reading smut. You should have thrown a fit becasue this is alot better than most of the stuff you normally see. The writing flows nice and you have a wonderful balance of dialoge and action. It's not going to fast or slow(does anyone really go too slow?) and has just the right stuff to keep you interested. Amazing for only two chapters. Thank You. DK;) Reconmendations. 'I No Longer Cry Alone' 'Koibito Yami' 'Tearing down the sky' Anything by either of these authors it the best! Good lemons and plenty of plot. Try them! hato_chiisai is a fan of Yami/Hikari pairings and vegeta999(?) has all Yami/Seto. Great authors and now I can add this to the list! Thank you very much for writing this! Sorry for the long review.
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Reviewed By: Angel-Fish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't know about anyone else, but I'm waiting for a continuation. I like the way you've written Kaiba - he's still in character, which is a bonus, but he's still having little issues. I'd like to know where this goes - it was really enjoyable and you don't see as much of this sort of pairing. Keep it up! Angel
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