| "The Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: December 18, 2001 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I wonder if Veggie is gonna try to make up with Bulma. Hope so-can't wait those those two together. By the way, sorry you were in the hospital. I hope you're feeling alot better and that you manage to have fun on your birthday. Take care. |
Reviewed By: Lanina Nomina On: December 01, 2001 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
hiya! Nice fic. To bad it isn't finished yet. I'm writing fics too but i'vent got any finished :)
keep up the good work and errr...what is a 'mailinglist'??? sorry sometimes i seem a lil like gokou....my friends always say i'm like his sister....>:( well i gotta tell ya it's better then most fics i've read so far. well, L@r i guess |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: November 28, 2001 05:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it, soap operah hahaha, its cool, plus you write quick, so keep it up!
oh yeah and this is going to be a V/B right? |
Reviewed By: dbzfan_d On: November 27, 2001 23:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 and Chapter 9 are the same chapter. Please post chapter 9.
This is a fun fic! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: November 27, 2001 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! i loved the end of Chapter 14...very suspenceful! write more soon ...before i kill my self trying to figure out what happens next!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i'm still not used to this new voting system, but it's better than having your ratings plummeted, err, yeah, sorry *giggles* This chapter was good just as i had expected it to be. I love your interaction between the characters, great stuff, oh and sweet dreams, you earned your rest lol. |
Reviewed By: Bulma (lol) On: November 23, 2001 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I have to tell ya...I absolutly LOVE your story!!! I mean WOW!! The way you make Bulma and Vegeta is sooo cute! oh yeah that reminds me... can I be on your mailing list p-p-p-pleeeease??? I would be most appreciative, and if you ever need help or anything let me know K?
So you had a baby boy? That is so sweet, and touching, nothing is more precious than a young mother and her baby. So if ya don't mind me askng what did you name him? Trunks??!! ::giggles and gives a feminine 'Vegeta smirk':: Ok well I best be on my way!! keep up the excellent work! buh bye~
Love always,
Bulma
a.k.a. Steph |
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