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Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I Love it. Yeah I love. Okay. I thank you get the point. But you are right, Humans and Alcohol don't mix. I am glad someone tried to make Yamcha a some what good guy. Poor Bulma, I can't believe she did that. I am glad she got her act together. What would I do without her?
CRY |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
hey loved the chappy and i'm sad that it was the last i think u should do a sequal i would love to read it well i gtg keep up the awesome writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: jessbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: January 14, 2002 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have 18 reviews right now and you want 400? ROFLMBO. Yeah, that's stretching it. ;)
I like. It felt a tad rushed, but I know the urge to JUST FINISH! Yes, a sequel would be good. How would you handle the Buu scene. He wouldv'e broken 'The Vow'. That would be interesting. And there's your theme too. lol
Well, write more so I can read more! Must read more!! Well, on to write my own fic! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS GREAT. I LOVE IT!!! SEQUEL SEQUEL!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ewwwww, you ended it there!!!! :) You're good! Why did he look at her with hate? Was it hate for himself? Hate towards her for making him weak? Hate for what he couldn't be for her? Hate at himself for feeling what he feels? Man, Vegeta needs to loosen up! Will Bulma eve understand him enough to be able to understand him? (looks at last sentence) 24 hrs with no sleep and I start to lose my coherency, huh? I'm losing my touch! lol
Hey, thank you so much for the plug! And the review with it! Almost been a week! lol
Oh, I can't wait to read the rest! Oh, hurry up and update! It's stories like this that provide for inspiration. that and my dreams! I keep dreaming of that faceless guy.... :( Wish he'd hurry up and get a face already! lol Well, see you. Watching Angel whilst eating and reading fanfics and writing my own. I love multi-tasking! |
Reviewed By: bulmasb On: January 07, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story for a long time now, at first i saw it at fanfiction.net and I love were it's going! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 06, 2002 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Vegeta would say something so mean like that to Bulma. Jeez, she just had his child. I have a bad feeling about what she's gonna do next (given the talk she had with Goku). Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2002 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
man i can't believe vegita did that and bulma isn't gonna do anything....*gulps* harmful...to herself is she oh please no i can't wait long please don't take too long to update well keep up the good writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, you added the side to Yamcha everyone misses. I really think the man is nice, he just earned my disrespect in fighting. I mean, when the dice are rolled you can count on him. But that whole, 'I don't wanna die' scene in Androids saga was too whiny. To be a true fighter, you have to almost welcome death. You are death. It is your gift and other sayings along those lines picked up from books, movies, and TV shows.
Hey! I'm plugging! My new story has been put up, the A/U B/V. Dimensions of You. Since your a very good B/V writer.... Thanks.
Can't wait for more. I'll wait as long as it takes. At least you are updating. Some people start something and never finish it.... It's like they delve in and find the waters too deep. I say bring it on! Heck, I'll make the waters deeper myself. Kay, nough symbolism. Continue.
Goku? (shudders) Well, at least he wouldn't know what the heck you were doing half the time. I can just here him screaming, "NANI!?" lol Vegeta on the other hand.... Having no boyfriends, I'm pretty much free to fantasize, even though I usually go for a Vegeta-like Trunks. Vegeta is too old for me.... :( |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 01:22 CST
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ohhh!!! it was so good!!! where's the rest? don't leave me hanging dahlin~!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2001 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you're so bad to leave this on a cliffy. I want B/V to have their talk asap. So hurry up and update. Happy New Year. |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl On: December 30, 2001 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
love the chappy can't wait for the next one
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 27, 2001 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe them! They love each other and they're both too stubborn to admit it. Please continue-I'd like to see where this is headed. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it was very good i first started reading it on fanfiction.net i do believe well i haven't finished it yet cuz i'm like really tired and i need sleep but i would like u to e-mail me when u up date all ur stories my e-mail address is mousey7891@hotmail.com keep up the good writing
~trunksgurl~ |
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