| "The Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: January 06, 2002 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Vegeta would say something so mean like that to Bulma. Jeez, she just had his child. I have a bad feeling about what she's gonna do next (given the talk she had with Goku). Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2002 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
man i can't believe vegita did that and bulma isn't gonna do anything....*gulps* harmful...to herself is she oh please no i can't wait long please don't take too long to update well keep up the good writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, you added the side to Yamcha everyone misses. I really think the man is nice, he just earned my disrespect in fighting. I mean, when the dice are rolled you can count on him. But that whole, 'I don't wanna die' scene in Androids saga was too whiny. To be a true fighter, you have to almost welcome death. You are death. It is your gift and other sayings along those lines picked up from books, movies, and TV shows.
Hey! I'm plugging! My new story has been put up, the A/U B/V. Dimensions of You. Since your a very good B/V writer.... Thanks.
Can't wait for more. I'll wait as long as it takes. At least you are updating. Some people start something and never finish it.... It's like they delve in and find the waters too deep. I say bring it on! Heck, I'll make the waters deeper myself. Kay, nough symbolism. Continue.
Goku? (shudders) Well, at least he wouldn't know what the heck you were doing half the time. I can just here him screaming, "NANI!?" lol Vegeta on the other hand.... Having no boyfriends, I'm pretty much free to fantasize, even though I usually go for a Vegeta-like Trunks. Vegeta is too old for me.... :( |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 01:22 CST
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ohhh!!! it was so good!!! where's the rest? don't leave me hanging dahlin~!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2001 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you're so bad to leave this on a cliffy. I want B/V to have their talk asap. So hurry up and update. Happy New Year. |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl On: December 30, 2001 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
love the chappy can't wait for the next one
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 27, 2001 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe them! They love each other and they're both too stubborn to admit it. Please continue-I'd like to see where this is headed. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it was very good i first started reading it on fanfiction.net i do believe well i haven't finished it yet cuz i'm like really tired and i need sleep but i would like u to e-mail me when u up date all ur stories my e-mail address is mousey7891@hotmail.com keep up the good writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 18, 2001 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I wonder if Veggie is gonna try to make up with Bulma. Hope so-can't wait those those two together. By the way, sorry you were in the hospital. I hope you're feeling alot better and that you manage to have fun on your birthday. Take care. |
Reviewed By: Lanina Nomina On: December 01, 2001 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
hiya! Nice fic. To bad it isn't finished yet. I'm writing fics too but i'vent got any finished :)
keep up the good work and errr...what is a 'mailinglist'??? sorry sometimes i seem a lil like gokou....my friends always say i'm like his sister....>:( well i gotta tell ya it's better then most fics i've read so far. well, L@r i guess |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: November 28, 2001 05:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it, soap operah hahaha, its cool, plus you write quick, so keep it up!
oh yeah and this is going to be a V/B right? |
Reviewed By: dbzfan_d On: November 27, 2001 23:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 and Chapter 9 are the same chapter. Please post chapter 9.
This is a fun fic! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: November 27, 2001 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! i loved the end of Chapter 14...very suspenceful! write more soon ...before i kill my self trying to figure out what happens next!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i'm still not used to this new voting system, but it's better than having your ratings plummeted, err, yeah, sorry *giggles* This chapter was good just as i had expected it to be. I love your interaction between the characters, great stuff, oh and sweet dreams, you earned your rest lol. |
Reviewed By: Bulma (lol) On: November 23, 2001 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I have to tell ya...I absolutly LOVE your story!!! I mean WOW!! The way you make Bulma and Vegeta is sooo cute! oh yeah that reminds me... can I be on your mailing list p-p-p-pleeeease??? I would be most appreciative, and if you ever need help or anything let me know K?
So you had a baby boy? That is so sweet, and touching, nothing is more precious than a young mother and her baby. So if ya don't mind me askng what did you name him? Trunks??!! ::giggles and gives a feminine 'Vegeta smirk':: Ok well I best be on my way!! keep up the excellent work! buh bye~
Love always,
Bulma
a.k.a. Steph |
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