| "Everything You Want" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amaria2012(not logged in) On: May 06, 2005 14:28 CDT
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yet again another wonderful chapter to brighten me up after English class!Ms Mcloon(SP?)seem's cool,wish I had a teacher like that lol,anyways,can't wait for the next chap.
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Title: :o)
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (not signed in) On: May 06, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha! That last part was hilarious. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Amaria2012 On: May 04, 2005 20:43 CDT
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and yet again you wrote an amazing and interesting chapter!Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: :o)
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. Things are getting interesting. I look forward to see where you take this. You're getting me to like reading original stories as much as reading fan fiction. *wink*
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 16:33 CDT
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It's really progressing well. I'm glad you're taking it slow with their relationship. Look forward to more. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:05 CDT
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And I shall continue to reveiw!*claps*another good chapter!My friend red it too,but she don't have an account,so she says:great fic,keep it up and I agree!
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Of course I will keep reveiwing!This story deserves it!You are a very talented writer and I hope you continue writing.^^
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 14:59 CDT
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*claps*good job on the chapters!Keep it up,need to see what happens!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (not signed in) On: April 29, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated with more chapters! Keep them coming! I think your writing is excellent. I love the dialogue.
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Reviewed By: Amaria2012 On: April 28, 2005 20:26 CDT
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this story is so good!hope you update soon!
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Title: Good So Far
Reviewed By: JJQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 02:38 CDT
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Considering this is your first piece of art, wow!!!. Your doing fabulous so far. Keep it up. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: meatballheadzzz On: April 27, 2005 08:05 CDT
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Wow you can not show this to mom and dad!! lol...I loved the whole music genera thingy. (excuse my spelling) See I told you I would read it I just feel wierd reading it in school right now. I am so paraniod that someone will look over my shoulder and say that I am reading porn. You have a dirty mind you know that. lol. This story really is getting better. You were probably all excited that you got a long review until you saw it was me didn't you. HAHAHA well I fooled you. Anyways keep up the good work and don't forget to make me a website....(I am constently going to be on your back about that) hahaha. Much love Lacey PS. There is actually a rating on spelling and grammer? well that is complete crap. That is the dumbest rating EVER. Who really gives a shit. Well there are some anal people out that. But seriously that is stupid.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't know how excited I was to receive this notification of your new chapter. I'm glad you're continuing it. I really enjoy it and I'm glad I checked it out. I like how oblivious you make Bella, it sets up the story. She's obviously a naive girl who can't see the underlying stuff around her. The rivalry between Cole and Derrick is wonderfully set up. You're writing style is gettig better with each chapter. I hope you continue!
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Title: Good so far
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer(not signed in) On: April 26, 2005 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is starting to get good! I really like the set up. I look forward to more.
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Title: wow!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: April 25, 2005 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! jelousy and you know who this guy made me think of? ::ducky:: from Pretty in Pink lol god i loved Ducky. i absolutly love it and give this fic a A++++++ when you update it please send the update to the group ^_^ your a wonderful author
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