| "Standing Outside the Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoopdie doo... please continue... *too much Dr. Seuss...*
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: August 03, 2005 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter in whats shaping up to be a great story. I think I like this story best out of all of the ones you're writing for this series. I'm sad that you're going to be taking it off this site, I probably won't remember to read it anymore. I tried your livejournal but its full of non-story and that doesn't interest me (Sorry) and i'm notoriously bad at remembering to check individual websites. I'll be sad to see you go but i'm sure you must have your reasons. Have you considered a second livejournal or a yahoo group where people can get JUST new chapters without having to filter out the other stuff? I think that would be popular.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written and all the more powerful for being understated. At least Bradly came from a loving family, and has that memory from which to draw. Such courage he's showing, especially in light of the visions of what yet is to come and the ominous Hansen. I love the intellegence and tactical skills you show him having, and that we know so well in the adult character. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another terrific story -- not that it is a surprise coming from you. Fascinating to see how such a "gift" might affect how a family lives.
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Title: *squeal*
Reviewed By: bleachmeagain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 23:45 CDT
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I was so excited to see this already!!!!!! (yes I have been stalking your lj..*side glance* buuut!!!) I'm just so excited to see this up!! Made my night definitely! Wonderful prologue. I'll save rating for further down the road even though you would probably recieve all tens anyway (of course!). Can't wait for more!
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