"The Tale of Hyuuga Kaede" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: joyceeee On: May 23, 2005 10:03 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: An absolutely wonderful fanfic, the "real world" idea was very original! I would love to see more of Itachi though!
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 09:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This has to be my fave chapter so far. I like how it went from ninja world to the real world. My favorite sentence is: 'Iruka was the son of some obscure business tycoon, wearing a crisp polo shirt, slacks, and leather shoes, looking like he fell out of an ad for Calvin Klein.' Everytime I read that it makes me laugh.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay I've re-read chapter 3. I didn't really pay the work in progress any mind. Next time a new chapter is posted I'll and see if it says completed or work in progress.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 14:47 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed the little trip down memory lane. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see why Mayuri won't come out her room.
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Title: It;s me Reviewed By: dizzturbd_ethereal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 05:41 CDT Comment/Review: Hey, thanks. :) I'm glad that you're liking the story so far. By the way, the third chapter isn't finished yet. Please check if it's says "completed" or "work in progress". Thank you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 00:00 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another very good chapter. I like how the story is going. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 12:15 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: And it just keeps getting better. I wonder if by the time Sasuke reaches the lake will Itachi still be there.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A very good and enjoyable story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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