| "No One Needs To Know" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: nduns [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 19:45 CST
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It feels SO good to read THIS again! God, I hated that for two years, my computer wouldn't let me access this site! Then, my dad reinstalled ALL the software, and BAM, I'm able to come back to the site. If you didn't know, I'm that N2000 guy who sent you three reviews. I really love you as an author. I was so inspried by this, I wrote a NamiXLuffy fic myself of ff.net with the same title. It plays out differently, though. Anyway, you are my favorite Romance author! Good for you!
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Reviewed By: kitsunesdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jprincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent I loved the story I thought it was funny trying to picture Luffy being sexually active LOL I love it keep writing. Can't wait to read you're next one ;-)
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 19:07 CST
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Keep on writing. You got great potential
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Reviewed By: Yash's Chick On: August 28, 2005 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! I personally am Luffy x Nami fan (even though I've only seen a handful of the episodes). All the hentai scenes were written masterfully and tastefully. I don't know if you plan on continuing more with this story or start another one but please do grace us with your creative skills again! p.s. Love your "deviations" especially the one on one of the Luffy x Nami shrine pages. More of those would be great to see too :)
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a great story!! ive never seen those pairings so far. I think this story is freakin awesome so keep on writing, come on u know u wanna!!! lol well just keep on writing and hopefully u will make things a little more dramatic as the story goes onlike kidnappings and fights to the death and maybe if your okay with it almost rape, meaning someone come to the rescue......well keep those things in mind as you write the next chapters till then ill just die slowly everyday till u update once again!!! :cries: ^_^
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 19:39 CDT
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I think maybe you should have a chapter (I'm not sure wether or not you plan to go on.) in which someone catches the two of them in the act. I mean, I kinda' hoped that would happen in those three chapters.
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 10:17 CDT
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Actually, Zolo's original name is spelt with one R, but I can forgive you for keeping it that way.
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 10:14 CDT
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I always knew they'd wind up together. Heh, heh. During the scene where they kiss, the song "Suteki Da Ne" from Final Fantasy X kept going on in my mind! This is like a fic author's dream come true. I mean, how many people would get a relationship between those two to seem professional.
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Reviewed By: Yaoi Neko On: July 14, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For this fic, there should be a 10+ rating. I haven't seen many Luffy/Nami fics, and I really liked it. Also, liked the whole Sanji/Robin pairing. I have never seen that pairing, so pleasantly surprised. I love your writing style, since the story had a nice flow to it. *thumbs up* I LOVED IT!!!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: May 30, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great! I seriously, I never enjoyed a hentai fic this good in a very long time. Oh and by the way DeepBlue1 in the original manga his name is Zorro, GOT IT! Stop watching that Fox Kidz crap!
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Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The guys name is Zolo. Got it? All in all i loved the fic though i prefer Yaoi alot more. Fianl rating 8. Be happy
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