| "Detachable Asset" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope there is a continuation to this story cause I wold LOVE to read it. You are a Fantastic writer, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...thats all I have to say. Very nice fic here, I was impressed by the way you took very...unorthodox devices and integrated into the story. Awesome job, this one almost demands a sequel. Almost (becuase it is ultimately up to you!). Keep it up, nice job! d('')b
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Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have reviewed a lot of lemons, but this is one of those you come back to a year later, like I have to say that this is a perfect fan fic!
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Title: baka...
Reviewed By: Oni the first [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
To anyone else reading this, please disregard and if possible, erase the review by Oni-mon 'No really, I'm Oni.' He's an absent-minded idiot who forgot he had signed up to this site years ago. ...I should know...
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Title: detachable asset
Reviewed By: distantskykingharuka On: November 02, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was a very interresting piece of work i almost passout reading it ;-D well done
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Reviewed By: L.C. On: September 21, 2003 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was awesome I would love to see more |
Reviewed By: AJ Angelique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lololololololololol! Oh that was great! I loved the whole story and it was very original. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I own a few Bondage Fairies comica and have read several of the issues. I have to say that you kept with Condom's theme. Excellent interpretation. Please make another. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 03:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad! Do some more of these :) |
Reviewed By: Achilles, The Guy With a Bad Ankle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the first review said was rigth, you do what it take to be a hentai author. But overall, you are a good writer. Your descriptions are well-done, and the dialouge you had was supurb. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Gabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got what it takes to be a famous henta-writer. =) |
