Reviewed By: Yoko Oro (the beautiful question) On: April 29, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a truly beautiful poem. Not only does it have heart, but it requires the reader to use his or her brain in order to understand it. I hope I interepreted it correctly. This is what I got from it: you used a metaphor portraying the instant right before death were memories flood as an entire life. Was that right? If not, please email me. I'll also tell you why I counted off 1 point for originality. ^_~
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