Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 15:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hurray, the past has been corrected! As uploaded, the last two chapters have no separation into paragraphs which would make them easier to read, but a hopeful and enchanting story in any case.
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