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Reviewed By: Ping pong panda On: July 23, 2005 09:56 CDT
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I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews so far. Woot. Theres only one more chapter left. It's gone so fast. I remeber sitting in your room with you Alex and Sean whilst giving you ideas for the first chapter. hehehe, I'm coming over later to kidnap your yuu yuu hakusho manga.
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Reviewed By: shadowless ninja On: July 23, 2005 09:50 CDT
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~Imagines Hiei with jiggly boobs then bursts out into laughter~ Good job. Update soon.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAWWW!!! Hiei can be nice! ^_^ I don't even know how to put music on a blank CD. Um... the scratch mark scars were made by a male demon that put a claim on Ayame as a potential mate and means that she is being courted and is supposed to be off limits to other males? Maybe. Head hurts from eaten too much sweetsnow! *clutches head* Uh-oh! Got to run. Being chased by hurricane Emily! *runs faster than Hiei away from hurricane with 100 mph winds* Sayonara!!!!
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 16:50 CDT
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(continued) Ash: To fend for himself wasn't enough torment.
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 16:43 CDT
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Reply to starwind327: Ash: That was strange. Just curious. But how did you review to the wrong person? I'm glad you like my story =3 By Kag, i think you mean Kagome from Inu-Yasha? Personally i don't think Hiei and Kagome go together. She's too soft, and girly. She's nearly always being saved by Inu-chan. Another pairing that really does my head in is Hiei and anyone one of the sailor soldiers from sailor moon. Firstly, Hiei only comes up to about their knees. Yuusuke: Their long legs scare me. Ash: And secondly, Hiei wouldnt be into girls that flaunt their asses off to everyone. And fight in high heels. Hiei: Damn right. Ash: Oh! i also hate Botan/Hiei and Yukina-chan/Hiei pairings. Their just wrong in so many ways. Botan: *shivers* Hiei is scary. Hiei: *shudders* Some of you people have some really sick things going through your minds. Botan is just too happy. If we were in the Makai, and Koenma wasn't my boss. I'd of probably killed her by now. Botan: *gulp* Hiei: And Yukina is my sister for crying out loud! I am NOT into incest. I just protect her from youkai. Like i do with Ayame/Ash. Ash: *growls* I do NOT need to be babied. Hiei: Shutup shoujo. Kuwabara/Me fics are just scary. No WAY would i ever even hug Kuwabara. Let alone some of the things you people are suggesting. Not even if i was dieing. And to save myself i had to have sex with him to live. *shudders* Ash: See the damage you people are doing to him! But noooo getting thrown off a floating island as a child to |
Reviewed By: stix On: July 19, 2005 14:29 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:16 CDT
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woops. i reviewed to the wrong fic. lol. however, this is good.
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:15 CDT
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hm... please write more. i love hiei/kag fics!
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Reviewed By: slancaster13 On: July 19, 2005 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is lazy* Well when I was fourteen I couldn't spell to save my life. You on the other hand can spell. Oh if you see a slancaster113 that happens to be me as well. It means I signed in. *sweatdrops* Good chapter. Post soon!!
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Reviewed By: slancaster13 On: July 13, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love your (ya'lls) story!! I wish I had joined this place sooner. Uh there are a few mistakes from typing. But for the most part everything seems in order...What were all those questions again? I'm 15 ...uh...*scratches head* Oh my favorite charater is Hiei..um..I have no earthly idea what they will get for christmas. About Kuronue if you look at in in a survival way, yes they work. Because everything we were given has a purpose? Lol. YEAH! I heard about that bombing in London! It was bad injured 700. o.0 Ya'll must be about 15 or 16. As your charaters said. Uhhh.. Ok I'll leave you alone now.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: feelingood On: July 13, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really loved this story, so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 12, 2005 16:14 CDT
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this chapter was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: under construction
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: July 12, 2005 08:13 CDT
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Wow that was GREAT!!! I had to read over the other three I didn't review on ^^; but I am reviewing now and it counts for all three!! I think this story is great we are slowing finding out bits and pieces of Ayame's/Singe's past. Which I have to say is rather interesting. That is good for the draw of the story. But yea keep up the good work!! ^^ -InTheShadows.
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Title: Try It!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, what the hell! Kurama with Miirei and Hiei with Ayame! Maybe I'm being redundant since the couples always seem to be together in normal or odd situations. Maybe it's time for the unofficial to become official. *smirks evily*
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Title: Hello Again!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! ^__~ I wish I could update, but summer reading, little computer memory, no printer ink, and no knowledge of how to stuff things onto blank disks are all reasons I can't yet. You already know I'm an onna, about your age, I have five favorite character: Kurama and Hiei, ^__^ Ayame, Scorch and Miirei, not sure about pairings, yes make a sequel, I hope bat demons can fly, I have no three-worldly idea, and you are not a bad writer!!!! Glad you weren't in the explosion, Ash, and you are not mentally retarded because I would have done it, too. ^__^;; Alex why aren't helping Ash? Hiei! Get off of Ash or no more sweet snow! *picks up and dusts off Ash* Kurama, get your foxy ass back here! *chases after Kurama with leash and collar*
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