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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:00 CDT
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Oh Yah! Shounen: Boy Shoujo:Girl. Basicly thats Hiei's nickname for Ayame because she smaller then him, it's also an insult because he's comparing her to a child.
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 09:58 CDT
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Ash: Yup, i've only worn a skirt once in my life, i was forced to by my evil mother, i've been able to sneak into my friend's school and use the computers, i even borrowed his school uniform XD I wonder what will happen when they find out i don't go to his school, i've allready been in three of his lessons without them realizing, it's now lunch time, Alex's off somewhere with sean getting lunch, yup, she here aswell, in anothe spare uniform, she stole someone else blazer XD I can't upload a chapter of the story at the moment, but as soon as i get home i will. Ah! Alex and Sean are back, with pizza! hehehe. Alex: Well Ash has gone after the pizza, we started to write out the chapter on the computer, but people kept on coming over, and in Ash's mad attempt to hide the story, she deleted it, crazy onna. Ash:Shutup you! Alex:*laughs* Well, we should be back in a few day, so you lovely reviewers, and you morons that are jst reading the story without reveiwing, should have another chapter.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahaha!!!!! i love it i can berly wate for the next one
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 13:47 CDT
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Woo hoo!!! another awsome chapter! i feel bad for ayame cause i hate skirts too! iv only ever worn 2 in my life and never again. anyway, make another chappie soon^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: Ha!! Ha!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dark colors rule!! Nice chappy! What's shoujo and shonen? @_@
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 01:48 CDT
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Hehehe, i'm writing myself a review ^.^ Ayame's complaining because something terrible(which will be revealed in later chapters)happened in her past, and she's to stop falling for boys (or girls) But being around Hiei, makes her flood with emotions, like any normal female would, so she had to get away. Shoujo means girl, basicly thats Hiei's nickname for Ayame, seeing as she's smaller then him, and it's slightly insulting, because he's comparing her to a child. and Shounen means boy. Alex's asleep in her bed (yes, she has her own bed at my house) Maybe i'll wake her up and we'll post another chapter. I've also done some Art, i'll try and get that up aswell, gotta' resize it first. Both of us are going to another friend's house, which is about 40 miles away, and we'll be gone for the whole week, so ciao. -Ash
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 19:42 CDT
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Awweee! cute chapter lol. i wonder what's gonna happen next? TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: AAWWW!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ayame got stuck under Hiei...wait...what's she complaining about?!?! ^_~ What's shoujo and shonen? I have an idea but I get confused too easily!! @_@
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Title: Cool Story!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! What's a kajihenge?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice revenge... thou i would of gone after him for it... but thats just me please up date soon! me want more
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 14:52 CDT
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muahaha! awsome revenge!! can't wait for the next one^.^
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 13:18 CDT
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lol i liked your new one^.^ is hiei gonna get revenge??
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo! its the next one and thanks for the cookie *munchis on cookie* can berly wate for the next one well untill than i hope you have luck clering that incident up...... thou i have to amit that was probly rilly funny.
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 19:28 CDT
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Hi! I just read your story and its freaking awsome! Hurry and make another chapter pleeeeeeease!!!!!!^.^ p.s. I don't know why people wont review, cause its an awsome story^.^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*preses face to moniter* i know others are out there so how come ya'll arnt revewing. well if you wount i will. Araxiel nice chapy i like how this is going. i can berly wate for the next one and thanks for the love your #1 fan, inuyasha-lovers
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