| "Remains" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 15:22 CST
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Hey there i love this story it came out really good. i really want to know what happens next. please update soon. you left off at a cliff and i want to KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. update soon. Ja Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Ukari-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! It's getting better and better! You really did inspire me and now my story is starting out pretty well. It's all thanks to you ^-^! I really hope to read more soon! That means update!
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Jenny B. On: June 28, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. Lovely story so far. Write More. Chao!
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Reviewed By: phalon22(nsi) On: June 26, 2005 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this chappie too! It's nice to see what you can come up with! I'm liking the interactions and revelations that are coming around. :) Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: June 13, 2005 17:09 CDT
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Spoiler is fine! I wonder if it was either Shigure, Hatori, or Yuki. I doubt it would be Ayame yelling at Akito, just seems totally out of character. I really enjoyed this chapter! Please update soon, this is a brilliant and great story.
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Title: KICK ASS!!!!!!!!!11
Reviewed By: skypperd On: June 11, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i LOVED this chapter. Though i was a little surprised to know that Akito was a GIRL. I mean it's a guy's name! wow. That's actually kinda scarry i mean WOW. ANd i loved how you put the chapter together. I can't wait to find out who the father is! I loved this chapter. You really are a good writer. Have you ever considered becoming an real writer? This is really good. I definitally can't wait till i figure everything out. I mean after it ends i'll print it out and read it over and over. Mabie you should talk to the writer of fruits basket. This would be a killer fruits basket episode. Well she might change some things i dont think she should though it's really good. But it could have both of your names on it. And then you could start being a writer. I think you'd be kick ass at it. Anyway i wish you luck. Oh and i dont think anyone minds your spelling errors. I dont even notice half the time and we all probably know what you mean. or atleast i do. So don't worry about it. ^^. Dragonchick88@bellsouth.net Sincerly, Skypper demon.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: cr On: June 09, 2005 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you haven't updateed in a while i wanna know what happens and if her friends and if they find summi.
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Reviewed By: Skypperdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your fanfic! I kind of want Sumi to end up with Kyou i think his name was. And who's kids are who's? Is this girl related to Tohru? Please update soon! The suspence is killer!!!!! Kaya is sooo cute! And i love how the characters have their own personal personality. Sometimes in fanfics you find that the characters are very very similar. This one keeps you on your toes. Which is great cause sometimes i can guess what's comming next. I can't in this one! I LOVE IT! It's VERY interesting and like i said the suspence is KILLER! I love your story. My email is dragonchick88@bellsouth.net.
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Reviewed By: Ukari-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! I love the idea of creating a completly different story and only using the basic guidelines of the series. i actually thought of writting a story like this a while ago, but never felt up to it. I think your story inspired me to work on it!^-^ I hope to read more soon!
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Title: bravo
Reviewed By: cr On: May 23, 2005 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. I really enjoy all of the characters!!! I'm printing out all of the chapters for my friend to read!! I cant wait for the next chapter to come out!!! I hope that we find out more about kaya. Becuase she sounds like an adorable little sister.... and i hope that we get to see mor characters enter the story.. Thank you for writing this story. By the way i think that Fumito is the dog
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Title: :`(
Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: May 19, 2005 00:13 CDT
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Tadashi is kinda cool. ATleast for now he is! Great job on this fic so far!!! I can't wait to see what you can come up with next! I like how things are explained but so sad about Kyo's end.
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Title: omg!!!
Reviewed By: vampirgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is sooo good!!! i no my opinion is biased since im a frends but it is sooo freaking awsome!!! continue-SOON!!!! luv, vamp
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Reviewed By: Stefni [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 02:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. Was it Yuki that committed suicide when Tohru left?
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Title: Wonderful.
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this a great story. aIf you continue i'm sure it will only get better. Please write more^^
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: May 01, 2005 01:32 CDT
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I think it's interesting, however I wonder who's kids are who's... And um who's kid is this? Is this Tohru's daughter? Oh please update soon!
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