Reviewed By: Trista On: June 23, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was not as good as it could have been.
Also, there were some very, VERY bad showing of
characters, for instance, do you think that
they'd just let Heero die and say 'oh well, too
bad' over the lose of their BEST freind, I think
not. And I doubt they'd take either Heero OR
Usagi to the hospital because He's BETTER than
the average human, and she's NOT human! Do you
really want someone finding that out, I think
not! all and all, it was amaturic, But it DOES
have Potential! Keep it up! |
