Title: awwww
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you try paragraphs? that would have helped the reading, a little. but aside from that and a few grammar mistakes, it was SO cute! i hope you write more.
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