| "Ai no Unmei" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your story!! keep up the good work!!! plz r&r my story Sorry!! NO Name
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:18 CDT
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Wow, that was gorgeous. It read like poetry. And the ending with Izayoi and Inu no Taisho was unexpected, and a nice, unique touch. Good way to end that chapter.
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:11 CDT
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I think your writing keeps improving with each chapter. The flashback was very well done and effective. Now to read the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:03 CDT
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I love the way the first chapter connects to the first movie, Affections Touching Across Time. I loved the tree scene in that movie, and I think you did a good job of recreating that atmosphere.
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:02 CDT
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I think I liked the second chapter even better than the first! The part where everyone made excuses to leave Inuyasha and Kagome alone was so cute and funny. Now to read chapter three...
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