Title: More?
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you have here. The story sounds interesting and has promise. Are you going to make them legendary like Goku and Vegeta? Sorry... it's your story. Update please. ^_^
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