| "Kaya" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: TiannaBannana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a really good story u gotta keep going its so supenseful awww she so belongs wiht Miroku, nice job**** Captain Obvious( my nickname)
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
...NO OFFENSE... BUT THAT WAS THE SHORTEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER SEEN. lol... i like the plotline... but can you please PLEASE not have it so that this Kaya girl and inuyasha fall in love... cause that's wayyyy tooo predictable... haha. i like it... update sooonnnn
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Title: Vamp!
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 01:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
little mor describing ther vamp. good story and dialogue. just need some better description. From ur friendly neighborhood BookNerd!
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