Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: ClownyMelonBalls [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been this excited since i was a kid watching the cartoon series. You have a very good story on your hands and I hope you continue it. One problem I had with it is you have all that in one chapter. 8 It took me a couple days to read this in my spare time and it took me a good 2 or 3 minutes alone just to find where I had left off previously. Everytime you have a major jump in the story from one set of characters to another, try making it a new chapter so itsa easier to pick back up later. Look forward to reading more if you put more up. Good job.
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