| "Jewel of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryua M On: May 23, 2005 23:37 CDT
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Yay! Inuyasha's getting nicer... slowly. He might be a bit crude, but he's got a very definate sense of morals under it all... he just likes to hide it, I think!
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Reviewed By: rhiara_123@hotmail.com On: May 20, 2005 06:48 CDT
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This is a really well written story, something that is rare and very enjoyable to find. You have created your world believably, and managed to give the impression of long traditions and ancient houses etc very well with the betrothal and wedding ceremonies. Good grammar and spelling, only one or two mistakes that I'm sure are just typos from fast typing. Your plot is good and I think that in the world you have created Kagome's character is more believable than a stronger woman. Dialogue runs smoothly, if occasionally a bit stilted, but I almost think that this is the idea to help show the awkwardness between characters. All in all, a very enjoyable story which I'm looking forward to an update to! Write more soon, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: May 13, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than Kagome seems too wimpy, its an a well written story. Alright, it promises to be an awesome story! Just promise that kagome's gonna get a backbone...
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Reviewed By: Ryua M On: May 13, 2005 07:05 CDT
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Got to love that demon virility. Poor little doggy, he has no clue what he's doing, really. At least Kagome has a woman there... he's all by himself.
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: April 30, 2005 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good I can tell that this is going to be an ineresting fic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUV yur fic! It's really good... keep up the good work and update soon!~~
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