| "Jewel of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: xCourtneyxRxContagiousx On: July 30, 2008 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee! That was adorable! I loved it 10 outa 10 no prob. That was a wonderful story way 2 go!
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 14:51 CST
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Great story, I loved it
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 15:34 CDT
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short action filled with a touch of romance. cute.
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix_ On: January 22, 2007 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing bad about this story I can say is there was no Miroku or Shippo! It would have been alot more funny. But thank you for not placing Kikyou in this. :P Somwhow, she makes the story unplesent. But I really liked your story, how Inuyasha didnt fall in love with Kagome right away was very realistic. Some stories make them like other in less then a month, which bugs me cause they rush it when they could do so much with that time. Great story, make a new one please, but make sure to put Miroku and Shippo in there, Sango too, but you need the two must funniest Characters...no Kikyou please lol
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 01:37 CST
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So beautiful and full of love. Forced together by circumstance and kept together by blooming love. I adore this fic as well as many of your others. I hope you never stop writing!
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: kamalakali [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely! A very beautiful story. I loved how the story focused more on the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome than the actual quest. The ending had quite a humourous twist, as well. Would it be too much to ask for an epilouge? Such as what happens when they return home? It would make me, and others, very happy! ::nudge, nudge::
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: June 30, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous! This was a good story action, adventure, comedy, romance, everything needed for a good story well done. I giv it a 15 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:15 CDT
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Kawaii!!!!! Thats so cute. Awww.... I feel so happy now. I'm so happy they got together and Naraku is dead and they have their kid and they love each other...awww... Excellent. Awesome job. I loved this story from the beginning, and I love it even more now. You did a really good job of warming them up to each other. It wasn't a cliff type relationship, but it didn't act like a plain either. Just right. Awesomeness.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Destinys_darkangel823 On: June 10, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!please update soon and make sure kagome gets a bit tougher!!!!!!!!thanks ja-ne
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 03:28 CDT
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Awww..kawaii!! He rescued her. How are they gonna get the Jewel though? Naraku is just gonna keep going after her if he still has the Jewel. Heehee...I have three reviews in a row. Where are the other people? Its so kawaii that they trust each other now. Kawaiiii!!!!!!!! Well, update soon, onegai. I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Akihana...not logged in On: June 03, 2005 00:13 CDT
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ooooo! insight into Inuyasha's character! His thoughts on the wedding night! ooo! awesome. Naraku does have that nasty habit of disappearing on you. How are they going to keep traveling if Kagome can't find the jewel? and what about when the baby is gonna be born. Pretty soon she's not gonna be able to walk/hike all the time. can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic!! I love your plot! Please update soon though, I got a little miffed for not realizing that I was on the last chapter, I didn't have time to prepare myself and now I'm suffering from separation anxiety -_-VVV Anywho, keep on writin'!!!!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 28, 2005 22:15 CDT
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Still great as always update soon. PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 16:01 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana... On: May 27, 2005 08:28 CDT
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Ahh...go Kaede! I have done something similar for friends before. It really is quite satisfying. I should say that though.. I can't see why Inu was mad about Kagome getting food. I mean, FOOD! Its nice that Inuyasha now knows Kagome well enough that he can call her bluffs, and tell how she feels. Thats really important in a relationship. In my opinio at least. Well, good job, and see ya soon.
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