| "Jewel of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: June 30, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous! This was a good story action, adventure, comedy, romance, everything needed for a good story well done. I giv it a 15 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:15 CDT
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Kawaii!!!!! Thats so cute. Awww.... I feel so happy now. I'm so happy they got together and Naraku is dead and they have their kid and they love each other...awww... Excellent. Awesome job. I loved this story from the beginning, and I love it even more now. You did a really good job of warming them up to each other. It wasn't a cliff type relationship, but it didn't act like a plain either. Just right. Awesomeness.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Destinys_darkangel823 On: June 10, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!please update soon and make sure kagome gets a bit tougher!!!!!!!!thanks ja-ne
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 03:28 CDT
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Awww..kawaii!! He rescued her. How are they gonna get the Jewel though? Naraku is just gonna keep going after her if he still has the Jewel. Heehee...I have three reviews in a row. Where are the other people? Its so kawaii that they trust each other now. Kawaiiii!!!!!!!! Well, update soon, onegai. I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Akihana...not logged in On: June 03, 2005 00:13 CDT
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ooooo! insight into Inuyasha's character! His thoughts on the wedding night! ooo! awesome. Naraku does have that nasty habit of disappearing on you. How are they going to keep traveling if Kagome can't find the jewel? and what about when the baby is gonna be born. Pretty soon she's not gonna be able to walk/hike all the time. can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic!! I love your plot! Please update soon though, I got a little miffed for not realizing that I was on the last chapter, I didn't have time to prepare myself and now I'm suffering from separation anxiety -_-VVV Anywho, keep on writin'!!!!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 28, 2005 22:15 CDT
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Still great as always update soon. PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 16:01 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana... On: May 27, 2005 08:28 CDT
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Ahh...go Kaede! I have done something similar for friends before. It really is quite satisfying. I should say that though.. I can't see why Inu was mad about Kagome getting food. I mean, FOOD! Its nice that Inuyasha now knows Kagome well enough that he can call her bluffs, and tell how she feels. Thats really important in a relationship. In my opinio at least. Well, good job, and see ya soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryua M On: May 23, 2005 23:37 CDT
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Yay! Inuyasha's getting nicer... slowly. He might be a bit crude, but he's got a very definate sense of morals under it all... he just likes to hide it, I think!
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Reviewed By: rhiara_123@hotmail.com On: May 20, 2005 06:48 CDT
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This is a really well written story, something that is rare and very enjoyable to find. You have created your world believably, and managed to give the impression of long traditions and ancient houses etc very well with the betrothal and wedding ceremonies. Good grammar and spelling, only one or two mistakes that I'm sure are just typos from fast typing. Your plot is good and I think that in the world you have created Kagome's character is more believable than a stronger woman. Dialogue runs smoothly, if occasionally a bit stilted, but I almost think that this is the idea to help show the awkwardness between characters. All in all, a very enjoyable story which I'm looking forward to an update to! Write more soon, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: May 13, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than Kagome seems too wimpy, its an a well written story. Alright, it promises to be an awesome story! Just promise that kagome's gonna get a backbone...
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Reviewed By: Ryua M On: May 13, 2005 07:05 CDT
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Got to love that demon virility. Poor little doggy, he has no clue what he's doing, really. At least Kagome has a woman there... he's all by himself.
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: April 30, 2005 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good I can tell that this is going to be an ineresting fic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUV yur fic! It's really good... keep up the good work and update soon!~~
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