| "Did you hear the sound of my heart shattered into pieces?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Untamed Melody On: August 04, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good,I admit I m not a Jin/Fuu person,but that episode made me wanna punch Jins nose to such a degree. Anyways I was really pissed at that for...lets see a couple more days ,but I still get mad when I think about it. Okay I really like your fic its creative cause most people would'nt write it in letter form,but you should put atleast some spaces or something to that effect.
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Title: Self Insertion
Reviewed By: DjRomeo On: July 23, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like said above, your grammar is a bit tacki. but i think i understand where you come from when you chose your fic type as self insertion. did something like this really happen to you? keep up the good work.
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Title: Heya!!
Reviewed By: Theforgottenone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow! Thats good. You need to work on spelling but it's really good! ^_^ ~Kisa~
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Reviewed By: Xhanthia On: June 30, 2005 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. And I totally understand where you're coming from. This is oneof those, "what if?" ideas, right? Pretty nice letter. I have only just recently begun watching Samurai Champloo. But, write on! (sorry for the pun)
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Reviewed By: USuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um... I don't know how to respond to this... It isn't really a fic. I like to review everything I read, and I'm having trouble. I guess add depth, plot, a storyline at all? Maybe you could use this as a story bunny or something. But as is, it doesn't really belong in a fanfiction archive. I urge you to give us some context for Fuu's letter.
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Title: Confuzzeled!
Reviewed By: Seasons Changing101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused. I thought that it was Jean and Logan (the names, not the pairing, ewww) not Jin and Mugen. Just tell me someting, are you from America? 'Cause if you're not, then I will be less confused!
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Reviewed By: Aoi Koori Luna On: May 11, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I got the gist of it, but really, you should check it over again, there are a lot of minor mistakes that put together, make one huge mistake. I mean no disrespect, I only wish to give you advice and help you to become a better writer. I'm hoping that you don't think that this review is to be mean; it is not! In fact! I'm totally happy that you made this story! I LOVE Samurai Champloo, and Jin/Fuu is my favorite pairing. It said in your story that Jin went with another girl, but at least it wasn't a story of Fuu to Mugen, who went with another girl. I hope you make another story maybe with a full Jin/Fuu this time.
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