| "This Time Around" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: aliases101hotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really reallly really like this story. And I do hope that it is a nejinaru fic those are my fav. Can't wait till you update.
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Title: Shikoshi
Reviewed By: Shikoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 14:20 CDT
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erm, btw, where's gaara? do you not like him? aaaaw, i was looking forward to your descriptive prowess when approaching gaara's especially unique looks. *gloomy sigh*
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Reviewed By: Shikoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaaaa...i love this fic. neji is too cool, too human. he's awesome. i love the prick-y sasuke and the super cool hinata. naruto...is uber awesome. he's just...naruto. erm, can i get a bit more humor from him? i think he deserves a bit more sarcasm and tounge-sticking-out-at-you action. ha, sorry. anyways, i love your writing. it's neat, it's grammatically correct, and i can't find fault! good working! by the way, your characterization and descriptive imagery leaves little to be desired! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: 2xBaka On: June 10, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the story was very well written because of the originality and well written language. The story presents a unique setting that is not done in other stories. In addition, I find that I love the depth of the knowledge behind setting of the story and the characters themselves.
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Reviewed By: twilight_aura On: May 30, 2005 02:59 CDT
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yayness!this chapter ish kewl!i think neji and naruto should be a pairin or somethin and where s my sasuke!!!???/please update!thank u!(i luv this story cause i luffers naruto and fencing!!)
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Title: not logged in
Reviewed By: Twilight_aura On: May 30, 2005 02:22 CDT
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um i only read the first chapter so far so im gonna review for the next one too^^but isnt the number 310 the number of the room for the chuunin exam or somethin?i dont know!>.
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Reviewed By: *akuma_river* On: May 26, 2005 23:09 CDT
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I love it.
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Title: joyceeee
Reviewed By: joyceeee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Using fencing as a theme was very interesting and original. Please post chapter 2b soon, I'm really looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Hen_Na_Ikimono On: May 22, 2005 11:51 CDT
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......... I like- i like- I LIKE IT!! Write down some more, or ill cry... you dont wanna make a girl cry, dont you? (makes the best puppy eyes she can) Pweeeety pleeease?
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Reviewed By: yuio1 On: May 09, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it so cool. i am going to add this to my favorite list. This story is so interesting. i want to do fencing, thank for telling me some beginning detail. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: HawksEyre On: May 03, 2005 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good fic and a nice take on the story. Fencing is a very interesting choice for Naruto. Nice writing style, easy to understand. Thanks for adding definitions for those who aren't very familiar with fencing terms. Hmmm...is Naruto's room number 314? Are you obsessed with pi? Just kidding. Anyway, nice work, keep it up, and hope you keep on with this story. I would prefer to have no pairings, but I don't mind yaoi. Any pairing is fine as long as its believable. It would be kinda cool to meet either Temari, Ino, or even better....Tenten.
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Reviewed By: Epilee On: May 01, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really loved this one! Very original and entertaining. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Megan Black On: April 30, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE STORY WAS GREAT!!! update soon please
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