| "Teamwork - The Night" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Otakumom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2010 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! There needs to be more NarXSakXSas 3 way stories. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: roxxihearts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why there isn't more team seven 3somes in the fanfic world D= This is so awesome! And the sex was first-rate ^^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:09 CST
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mmm. A first delicious step into a new fandom for me. And such a lovely pwp. I'm such a sucker for threesomes. I'm such a perv. Thank you for writing! --jess
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Title: *Waves flag*
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good ! i wish there was more *wiggles eyebrows* sexing thought out teamwork 1 and 2 =3 but it amazingness all the same !!!!!! GREAT JOB
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Title: Priceless
Reviewed By: freebird22259 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's priceless! I loved it! It was such an interesting way to read it too, Sasuke's point of view. Very nice. Audrey Rose ^_- a.k.a. freebied22259 & interruptedangel16
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Reviewed By: PARAD0X On: March 11, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like to give all 10's to fics, but as a PWP, this certainly takes the (very smutty) cake. Threesomes are extremely hard to write, and you pulled it off very very very well. It's been awhile that I read me some porn that was hot and sexually realistic!
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Reviewed By: o.0 On: November 24, 2006 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Puits fait ! Cela satisfait ma curiosité !
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Reviewed By: Blu_Munky -didn't sign in yet On: July 03, 2006 00:45 CDT
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...wow. just..WOW! i LOVED IT! so awesome, so very very awesom. Im not one for male on male, but it was still good.
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Reviewed By: fluffy-kins On: April 22, 2006 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soooooo awsome!!!!!!! i love sasuke/naruto and sakura...?...well it was really good.
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Reviewed By: omg hot On: December 30, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Best NaruSasuSaku fic. You win the internet.
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 00:52 CST
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Nice little story. It was a little odd, in that it seemed at first like Naruto was forcing himself on Sakura.... But then it was all alright. Poor Sauske... Naruto's in heat.
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Reviewed By: KuraiTamashii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! I normally don't like m/m things but this was excellent. I can't wait for your next fic. ^^
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Title: Teamwork- The Night
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting...Fooly...Cooly...lol!! That's a pretty good lemon there. I can imagine that happening, with the exception of Sasuke not kicking Naruto's ass sooner. heeheehee. Now...I know Naruto obviously knows what's going on...Sasuke doesn't...does Sakura? 'Cause then she can totally make all the other girls jealous. lol. Well....g2g Tchao!! lol. ^-^ Keep up the great lemony work!
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Title: HAHAHA
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my gosh this was so funny!! I am so glad you decided to write aout the night before because I was curious. My favorite parts were the male/make ones. It would be cool though, if you were to make a Fic just about Sakura and Sasuke. Anyways, keep the fics comin!
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Reviewed By: x-ploding-monkee On: May 01, 2005 02:25 CDT
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that...that was just wonderful...absolutely uber. sugoi, even. i am totally and utterly impresed by your capibility in the written word. truly outstanding. and you get everything across so well... and eventhough i myself am not particularly apt to male/male sexual relations as a source of excitment, i could not stop myslef from finishing this all the way through. nothing against the lifestyle, but im straight. nevertheless, i still give you my kudos (for what they are worth), and best wishes for your future projects.
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