Reviewed By: random reviewer On: August 02, 2005 12:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm fussy when it comes to paragraphing and spelling but otherwise this looks to be a promising fic! Most of the characters aren't too OOC (not that I'm very familiar with the Detective Conan anime), although Akane seems a teensy overworked. The plotline seems interesting... What are shinigami? Death gods? I suppose it would help more if I read the other fic you suggested... Keep up the good work!
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