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Reviewed By: Rhayne On: June 12, 2005 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. I found your characterizations really interesting and well done. A well written lemon with an actual short story is a rare find. Thank you. I would definately read any sequels. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Something Real
Reviewed By: Ranuel On: May 10, 2005 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just cries out for a sequel. After all they each need to reasure themselves that it WAS something real. This is great erotica that respects both characters.
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Reviewed By: dari'sgrl On: May 05, 2005 15:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
it was really good i think you should write a continuation..... lovelovelovelovelovelovelove xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 22:11 PDT
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the characterization of your one-shot and your explanation are wonderful. the citurs was tastefully done, and I enjoyed reading your fic. Thank you for sharing your awesome gift.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:52 PDT
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This is an incredible story and I would not mind reading a sequel. Too many times Inuyasha is portrayed as the aggressor and I think that what you wrote may be more realistic. You wrote Kagome and Inuyasha very well and you kept them in character. Again, this was a great story.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: FFD On: May 01, 2005 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very much. Very well written, look forward to reading more. Feudal Dream Demon
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_lennyasha On: May 01, 2005 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUmmmmm....Ok, this is NOT A FLAME!!!!!!!! Just someone blinking rapidly and blushing rather red! I liked it - but uuuh...dare I say "surprised" was I when they went ...er ...that far? Don't mind me, I don't read these things normally, but I'm a sucker for Inuyasha's childhood stories of angsty sadness! I must say, I DID skip over most of the ... er...more..."descriptive" paragraphs shall we say but I really liked it! POOR INU GETTING KICKED AND HIT WHILE SEALED! That part made me sad haha. Keep it up, sequel would be good!
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Reviewed By: RaptorChicky On: May 01, 2005 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Wow... -tries to come up w/ the proper words- Wow...that has to be THE BEST lemon/lime I've read in a very, very, VERY long time. (I'm thinkin' somebody needs to be nominated for IYFanguild 2nd Quarter...) Oh, and on the possibility of a sequel? Please say you will. -puppy-dog eyes-
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not logged in) On: April 30, 2005 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I don't even have the words to say how good is was, you left me spechless. and I LOVE IT! please please PLEASE write a sequal to this! I'd love to read it! and if you don't, then write another story like this quick! ^______^
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Reviewed By: rin136 On: April 30, 2005 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was good. If you write a sequel go for it. I especially liked you bringing up Inuyasha's childhood.
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Reviewed By: Ookami88 On: April 30, 2005 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Wow. I am in absolute awe of your writing style and skills. True, there are a few spelling/grammar errors, but nobody is perfect, and it doesn't detract much from the overall effect. I think this is a wonderful exploration of Kagome's character and her feelings for Inuyasha, and I'd say you are justified in your assertion that they could act and react in this way. A very enjoyable 'fic to read. ...and a sequel would be wonderful. :D
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