| "Hiei's Fallen Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your story is great. i i know what it's like to be disabled and the challenges it brings into someones life. i can't wait to read another chapter. please update soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Me. On: June 16, 2005 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. This is great. Its kinda sad though. I got a lump on my through just reading it, but thats a great thing. Wonderful story. Please update soon. Bye
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is definutly some thing diferint please continue soon
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Reviewed By: helloo im...me On: May 25, 2005 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! THAT POOR LIL GIRL!!!!!! by the way great story ggg
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Reviewed By: Aura Black Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is really good, so far. I'd enjoy it more if I knew what was going on! (Other than Kurama has a younger sister, and from Hiei's perspective there's something wrong with her) Don't get me wromg,I like it, I just want to see more story soon. Sorry, I'm just being impatient.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: (bookwormloverjen) On: May 03, 2005 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is very good, plz continue plz
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Reviewed By: Aura Black Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this. It's sweet without being sickening, and nobody's really out of character. My only real complaint is that is was soo short! (Sorry, I haven't read any decent fics lately that were also a reasonable length.) My only other complaint is kinda nit-picky (is that even a word?)' You misspelled the word stare towards the end, or rather you wrote 'stair' by mistake. That's all I really have to say, except please update this soon!
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