| "Bless the Child" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Gah On: August 03, 2005 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gah Hope shit isnt one of thoes retarted Mpreg things. Naruto's has to sexy no jutsi to swap to a female body. have him get stuck like that or something. Now Naruto stuck in his girl form and knocked up would be intersting. How would kuyybie effect the kid? Could be it's way out.. But then kyuubie got Naruto for a mom.
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Reviewed By: gryphonlady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD alright, an update! hehe, I love where this is going and I can't wait to see more. Btw, nice name for the ninja. Benni. XD
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
intersting..so Naruto is Pregnant and this isn't Yaoi...LOL...very interesting...can't wait to see what will happen when he finds out...hehehe...taht was a GREAT chatper I'm glad you decided to continue this cause oh man this is gonna be interesting...why did the sealed demon move? can't wait to find out...THANKS:D
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO...she isnt' right....LOL...hahahaha...that would be HILARIOUS...especially when Naruto finds out...oh man I hope you continue this soon cause I LOVE the idea of this...LMAO:D
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