"With You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: no way Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: No way! How can you only have two reviews for such a great story. I loved it, especially the scene with Kagome all drugged up, so glad it was a happy ending. Sesshy's great too! And you kept him and Rin in character. Nicely done, great job.
|
Reviewed By: Shadowcat_012 On: June 24, 2005 14:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: holy cow person! Man, that was one good story. I loved the fact that he was able to reach her like that and she was actually able to remember him even after she drank the potion! The whole thing had my heart pounding! Keep up the great writing!
|
Title: Wow! Reviewed By: KuramaIs4Me [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 00:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was the best thing I have ever read! You did an excellent job with that story. I hope you continue to write.
|